Here are a few that we’ve come up with. I’d appreciate your thoughts:
- Seattle Central fits you – Based in large part on results from student/staff/faculty focus groups we conducted and is taken directly from a student quote. I’m hesitant to use this because one of your the tagline “don’ts” is repeating part of the organization’s name.
— Judy Kitzman, Communications Specialist
A. You’re right to pick up on that don’t, Judy, as repeating your organization’s name in your tagline IS a waste of messaging real estate, especially when the other words don’t differentiate your organization (and you are using just four words).
One thing in particular we would like to do is set Seattle Central apart geographically from other colleges – we’re the only downtown community college campus and students love our urban location and diverse campus.
With that in mind, here are two options we’ve developed. I’m very interested in your feedback here:
- The college on Capitol Hill.
- Your college. Your future.
A: Judy, these are going in the right direction. But I don’t think either one does it: Location alone isn’t enough to motivate someone to matriculate, although diversity and/or a successful future may be. But put those concepts together and you’re far likelier to motivate prospective student interest:
Seattle Central Community College
Your future starts on Capitol Hill
This is just a quick draft Judy, that needs polishing, but take it from here!
If you have suggestions for Judy, please post them in Comments below.